The final frame, all the colours have been added and I have sharpened up some of the elements, including highlights on the character's hair, which as they are against black, really do register very quickly with viewers. So the extra effort is well worth it.
I have also resolved her left hand which had drifted out of her elbow and wrapped itself rather awkwardly around her waist. It wasn't working and needed to be tweaked.
Also worth noting that I have reduced the size of the dot screen in relation to the drawing. I wanted it to register as dots but not break up the details of the girl's expression, which is a key element to the story I am putting across.
I have also re-jigged the image within it's frame to better accomodate the word balloon.